Here’s an update to some characters of my cartoon strip. Artwork by Dwight Adonay.
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Of course these are initial concepts/first drafts of the characters as they are developed.
Another sample 1st draft of a script:
“ALARM CLOCK” – HUNGRY HUNGRY SCREENWRITER · script · 1 page(s)
By Glenn Magas (writer) & Dwight Adonay (art)
glenn@squint.tv, DWAdonay@msn.com
"FATIGUE"
Panel 1. Jake's Dad (COACH) instructs a group of five year old tee-ballers. Jake is among the tee-ballers.
Panel 2. The players are on the field. Jake's Dad frantically waves his arms and turns his head.
CAP: 9:00 AM
DAD: THROW TO 1ST! RUN! ALLIGATOR! READY POSITION! CHARGE THE BALL! THROW TO 1ST!
Panel 3. Jake's Dad plops down onto a recliner. Completely exhausted and dirty. Jake, still in a very clean baseball uniform asks him:
CAP: 11:30 AM
JAKE: CAN YOU THROW TO ME?
Panel 4. Jake goes to his Mom.
MOM: WHY DON’T YOU ASK YOUR DAD?
JAKE: HE’S TIRED OF YELLING.
More to come as I try to build interest and readers for the dailies in hopes to make it to syndication one day!
2 comments:
haahaah...CUTE!
Cool
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